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There is a place
I’ve been longing to reach
But I end up struggling
With reality
I try to take a needed breath in,
But it does not relieve my soul
I need my time…
They act as if
I’ve committed a crime
All I really wish to do
Is run away
I try to act as if I were fine,
But inside I am crying
This routine is become detrimentally repetitive,
I’m wasting my time trying
You can’t control me for eternity
You’re pushing me down,
And it will not be beneficial
If I’m trying to find my way,
To the place I long for
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:iconsumersela:
~sumersela Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
love your poems :)

and don't worry, you'll finish the journey to that place ^^
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:iconpandabunnycub:
Don't ever give up my friend. I believe you will reach that destination and then finally be happy for real
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:iconwhereicallhome:
~WhereICallHome Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awh thanks ^_^
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:iconpandabunnycub:
You're welcome :)
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:icondarkerhaze:
~Darkerhaze Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Id drink to that.. apple juice :)
I love it!! <3
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:iconwhereicallhome:
~WhereICallHome Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!! I'm allergic to apples :(
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:icondarkerhaze:
~Darkerhaze Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
:O
HOW!?!?!
I am so sorry! :(
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:iconwhereicallhome:
~WhereICallHome Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't have any for like a year, & when I had one again I was all itchy,red, swollen, & nauseated :(
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:icondarkerhaze:
~Darkerhaze Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
that sucks!!
I love apples! >_>
that sounds douchey....
Im sorry for you is what I'm trying to say.. :P
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~WhereICallHome Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lololol it's all good
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